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Thursday, June 15, 2006

Mahra's Task 2 essay on sport

Here is Mahra's task 2 essay that she emailed me yesterday. I probably won't have time to look at it today, neither will I edit Jean Luc's essay.

Hey! Teachers need weekends off as well!

Tony

This is the 'raw' text!



Sport is the one of the most important things in our life, which plays a big role in our life. Especially in young kind of people exactly on men, but also important for sick people, children and women. The government in all countries care about all kind of sports, such as; football, volleyball basketball, tennis and so on. Its also play a role in making games in the world level, the Football War Cap is the most famous game which is going on in these days.

Sportiest should have sportive spirit in their life, in my view, people are emotional, specially, if there games in there country against others in international conflicts. From this point, we can see from football games, can release patriotic emotions in good way, like, what happened in1998 for Football Ware Cup in France between Iran and America, therefore the result was for Iran, which were a safe way between the tow countries . The gifts and photos were given between them.

On the other hand, it can cause politics conflicts between countries, such as; the war between Vendors and Salvador in 1982, which resulted from the Football World Cup in Span, and also 1984 in Belgium,5000 supporters were killed in the match of Champions League, between Juventos and Liverpool.

Over all, the popular events like the Football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easy international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a good way. Finally, it is a game for fun and many people enjoy it and waiting for the Football World Cup in every four years.

So, what do you think?

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